Umbrella

when rain tumbled the skies they blackened lightening wrapped around branches and pulled stripping some autumn red leaves wind shears push crystal rain against my house polishing and cleansing away impure dust and debris i l o v e / a / g o o d / shower
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Dietrich Avatar
December 8, 2016 at 6:37 PM
so cute how you did this and the way it ended with the handle, excellent last words!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 8, 2016 at 6:53 PM
Thank you, Andrea :)
Andresen Avatar
December 8, 2016 at 12:48 PM
- A great shape poem, Kim - Well done - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
December 8, 2016 at 1:09 PM
Thank you :)
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