Umbrella

I do not need an umbrella You don’t have to shelter me from the rain I can carry my own weight I can handle the pain I do not need you to lift me up I am not waiting These aren’t tears that I’m crying I am not hiding I do not want your pity Because I have not failed Let me stand in the rain Holding my own weight I do not need an umbrella

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/10/2013 12:59:00 PM

Congratulations!!! Denise --It was nice viewing your Featured Poem on the soups Home page :) this past week. Take Care and enjoy the NEW coming week.... *Luv~ > LINDA <

Skat A

Date: 11/6/2013 12:31:00 AM

Denise, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/31/2013 12:26:00 PM

- Welcome to P-Soup, Denise ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/31/2013 10:21:00 AM

wow, love your Umbrella poem Denise,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Denise Brown
Date: 10/31/2013 10:48:00 AM

Thank you so much! I joined your contest even. Great cause. I'll definately go look at your poems too!

Poet Destroyer A
Date: 10/31/2013 10:22:00 AM

if you go through my poem list, you'll find one of my own favorite poem... titled " Umbrella "...stop by if you like and check it out....hugs...linda