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Umbrage

UMBRAGE

imminent rainstorm 
newborn leaves cleave to Spring oak
sting of pristine slap

Kim Rodrigues © 2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 4/22/2017 7:06:00 AM
Lovely imagery, Kim - great Haiku. Regards, John.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/22/2017 7:21:00 AM
Thank you, John!
Date: 4/22/2017 7:05:00 AM
Beautiful, love the birth metaphor. Very cool.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/22/2017 7:21:00 AM
Thank you, Phil!

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