Umbrage

UMBRAGE

imminent rainstorm 
newborn leaves cleave to Spring oak
sting of pristine slap

Kim Rodrigues © 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Michaels Avatar
April 22, 2017 at 7:06 AM
Lovely imagery, Kim - great Haiku. Regards, John.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 22, 2017 at 7:21 AM
Thank you, John!
Capitano Avatar
April 22, 2017 at 7:05 AM
Beautiful, love the birth metaphor. Very cool.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 22, 2017 at 7:21 AM
Thank you, Phil!
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