Umbra of Night

The reaper of the dark has crept in like a mist Trapping all its victims within the shadow net With vapors of hypnotic power you can't resist You fall helplessly into a numbing trance To escape this snare there is no chance All precious memories you soon will forget Awake and seek the light oh dreary dream Fade away far from all my thought Unleash your grasp for you hold the beams Of the moon's pure and righteous light I beg of you oh ebon veil that drapes the night Release to flight all the visions you have caught 12/24/18

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Date: 1/14/2019 5:30:00 PM
Congratulations for your win Wren! :)
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Wren Rushing
Date: 1/14/2019 6:08:00 PM
Thank you Heidi!
Date: 1/14/2019 7:12:00 AM
“With vapors of hypnotic power” wow! Congratulations on this 1st tier win !
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Wren Rushing
Date: 1/14/2019 12:16:00 PM
Thank you ps!
Date: 12/28/2018 11:53:00 AM
You have risen to the sponsor's challenge with a most capable pen, Wren. This deserves to be on the winners' list. Regards // paul
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Wren Rushing
Date: 12/28/2018 12:40:00 PM
Thank you Paul and have Happy New Year my friend!
Date: 12/25/2018 7:03:00 AM
Well written Wren..best for a win.
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Wren Rushing
Date: 12/25/2018 7:59:00 AM
Thank you Vijay!
Date: 12/25/2018 5:54:00 AM
Caren I believe you are right about the mental health. I'm crazy enough already!
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Date: 12/24/2018 8:53:00 PM
Ah, as if we could release and remember all of our night visions. There must be a reason they are so secretive; maybe it is to preserve our mental health? Great poem, and I concur that it would be mighty if it could be done.
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