Cecilia Macfarlane Poet Acrostic

Ultimatum

U nreasonable demand...." Poetry soup or me!"

L ove is not controlling, that I can guarantee

T roubling is your unpredictable demeanor

I llogical thinking, needed was an intervenor 

M anipulation one of your most deplorable traits

A busive verbally, you barricaded all debates

T houghtless trying to quell my poetry passion

U ncomprehending, you are without compassion

M istreated no more, I finally stood up for me!

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Simon King March 19, 2020 at 10:48 PM A great read truthfully penned by the feel of it Cecilia Macfarlane March 20, 2020 at 5:49 AM Thank you Simon. Unfortunately a true write. Hugs

Robert Lindley October 4, 2015 at 5:43 PM Always hold yourself to your core values and fight to stay free. Never let anybody "own you"! Control freaks, I've met them before. I broke free as soon as was possible. Great acrostic, and a joy to see that you finally said--no more! A7. Cecilia Macfarlane October 4, 2015 at 8:51 PM Thank you Robert, I'm finally free and better for it : ) Hugs

Paul Callus April 29, 2015 at 3:17 PM If I'm not mistaken this is the second poem that you have written on this subject, Cecilia! So I take it that this is very real! Hope the illogical thinking will change to a more positive attitude. All the best. // paul

M. L. Kiser April 20, 2015 at 9:24 PM Bravo...the poet must write, despite the opinions of others, but sometimes I've found that a little constructive criticism, goes a long long way; especially when I've misspelled something...tee-hee.

Len Gasun April 15, 2015 at 10:36 AM You expressed yourself very well on this awesome acrostic poem my very dear friend of mine. Thank you so much for sharing! Thank you so much as well for your precious time stopping by. Hope you are fine always my dear. Sending you many hugs, smiles and kisses! love lots, Leonora

Joseph May April 14, 2015 at 3:47 PM That's right Cecilia stand up for what is right ...keep your passion for writing alive...hugs

Jack Ellison April 14, 2015 at 2:29 PM Bottom line!... not mess with Cecilia! LOL Huggs, Jack xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen April 14, 2015 at 12:45 PM Dear Cecilia, a skilful and touching poem - Writing is good for the soul - I know :) - big hugs // Anne-Lise :) Cecilia Macfarlane April 14, 2015 at 1:24 PM It sure is! Thanks Anne-Lise. Hugs

Andrea Dietrich April 13, 2015 at 6:41 PM oh GOOD FOR YOU, my sweet lady!!!Please let me in on this one, in a soupie. I know you have had problems. it's the same damn man? I feel your pain, my friend!

John Squires April 12, 2015 at 10:48 PM Very good acrostic. It put the message across clearly. Blessings to you. Cecilia Macfarlane April 14, 2015 at 1:24 PM Thank you John