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Ultimate Betrayal

Playful laughter rests. Parental steps come nearer - reality fades.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/9/2013 1:46:00 PM
Totally understand..Great work..Sara
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David De la Croes
Date: 5/10/2013 4:12:00 AM
Thank you, Sara.
Date: 4/22/2013 11:56:00 PM
Very ominous, left me feeling unsettled--but that's precisely why I like it.
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David De la Croes
Date: 4/23/2013 1:09:00 AM
Thank you for your comments, Jeremy. Poets are sometimes the voice of the voiceless, especially on topics which are oppressive. Have a great week, David.
Date: 4/22/2013 2:58:00 AM
- Well done haiku, David. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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David De la Croes
Date: 4/22/2013 8:04:00 AM
Thanks, Anne-Lise. Pity the subject is so grim... David