Ultimate Betrayal

Playful laughter rests.
Parental steps come nearer - 
reality fades.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Kendrick Avatar
May 9, 2013 at 1:46 PM
Totally understand..Great work..Sara
De La Croes Avatar
May 10, 2013 at 4:12 AM
Thank you, Sara.
Martin Avatar
April 22, 2013 at 11:56 PM
Very ominous, left me feeling unsettled--but that's precisely why I like it.
De La Croes Avatar
April 23, 2013 at 1:09 AM
Thank you for your comments, Jeremy. Poets are sometimes the voice of the voiceless, especially on topics which are oppressive. Have a great week, David.
Andresen Avatar
April 22, 2013 at 2:58 AM
- Well done haiku, David. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
De La Croes Avatar
April 22, 2013 at 8:04 AM
Thanks, Anne-Lise. Pity the subject is so grim... David
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