Ulexite -1

Opaque opiums surfaced
Brash helpless I languish
Menial remained purpose
Opaque opiums surfaced
Rivulets of solace purchased
By stimulus I am vanquished
Opaque opiums surface
Brash helpless I languish
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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April 22, 2012 at 3:00 PM
I like your triolet, but do not understand the title.
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