Ugly Loafers

black ugly loafers
are old fashioned, out of style
looks fine on bare feet

Copyright © 2010 By Caryl S. Muzzey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Culverhouse Avatar
April 18, 2010 at 11:57 AM
different take on the shoes--keep sharing with us. Made me chuckle!
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April 18, 2010 at 10:33 AM
What an interesting perspective! Nice use of imagery. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen
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April 17, 2010 at 8:16 PM
I have to agree with you on this one Caryl. good luck...Margaret
Mehta Avatar
April 17, 2010 at 8:03 PM
Good luck in the contest. Nice haiku
Mckenzie Avatar
April 17, 2010 at 7:44 PM
Caryl~ I bet even if they are ugly they are comfortable lolo Good luck on the contest! Laura :)
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