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Ugly Face The law, says leave no trace, but the eyes. a hateful rag, that smells; of unclean things, of sour food, and drink, of his taste, and his smell, when he is… done. Cover yourself. cover everything… about you. repulsion, resounds in the image, of reflection, uncivilized. Cutting parts away, unneeded items, lust not love, slavery. What do you feel? Do you feel?

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Date: 11/19/2019 8:55:00 AM
Wow! this person must be heartbroken, I feel sad if this person was in love.
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Date: 11/19/2019 7:49:00 AM
Wow! The strength of evil leaves an indelible image even when death overtakes the perpetrator yet heaven has its way with revenge.
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Date: 11/18/2019 8:14:00 PM
I imagine 'success' for this write would be leaving me disgusted at the subject of the poem. Well you sure succeeded!! Smiles, Gershon
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Date: 11/18/2019 8:44:00 PM
If I have made you "feel"...then that is a good thing... disgusted.. is okay... it was not a happy write... something about the scam I received, made me write it... odd? thank for stopping by... Ann

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