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Ugliness

Under the skin, it lurks - Ungodly, ungrateful, Unjust, and raring to Unleash viciousness with Unconscionable acts. Utterly devoid of Understanding, it reeks! April 30, 2021 for Kim Merryman's Pleiades U Poetry Contest

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/12/2021 3:18:00 AM

Very descriptive of maybe a personality characteristic? Enjoyed reading your winner. Congrats. Sara

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/7/2021 4:02:00 PM

Perfection my friend! A deserving Top win Andrea. Congratulations! Blessings xxoo

James Inman

Date: 5/6/2021 11:17:00 PM

Excellent Andrea! I did one but did not get it in the contest.

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 5/5/2021 7:44:00 AM

Congrats on your TOP win Andrea... Hugs.. ~ Ani

Kim Merryman

Date: 5/4/2021 6:51:00 PM

Excellent description and flow, Andrea! congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M

Eve Roper

Date: 5/4/2021 10:16:00 AM

Great write, Andrea, congratulations on your win. I didn't win with my verse, howmanysyllable screwed me on my last line with 7 syllables, I should have rechecked. I'm made at myself. Thanks again for your permission. Hugs Eve

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/4/2021 12:43:00 PM

I sure understand THAT feeling, Eve. Messing up in contests. Ugggg. I should have done Uggg as my U word!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/4/2021 7:57:00 AM

Back to congratulate! Great job!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/3/2021 12:38:00 PM

Top notch in form, alliteration and content, Andrea! Congratulations!

Anisha Dutta

Date: 5/3/2021 11:27:00 AM

BRILLIANT. Big Congrats to win TOP. Always Topper

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/3/2021 10:39:00 AM

Powerful, realistic picture of the ugliness that lurks just below the surface. Congratulations on your win dear friend!

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/3/2021 10:38:00 AM

Back with my congratulations to you dearest, Andrea, you deserve it, hugs and regards

Joseph May

Date: 5/3/2021 10:28:00 AM

Congrats on your win Andrea..

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/3/2021 8:41:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Love It. A wonderful write. Have a blessed day.................

Jan Allison

Date: 5/3/2021 8:39:00 AM

U did great Andrea, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Christuraj Alex

Date: 5/3/2021 7:51:00 AM

I was reading your works. Your short poems, for example, 'Life at a Glance', and many others are really beautiful.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 5/3/2021 6:50:00 AM

Not Ugly. Beautiful!

Joseph May

Date: 5/2/2021 7:45:00 PM

Great job with this one Andrea, best wishes

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/2/2021 1:05:00 PM

A soulless, heartless being whose life is pure darkness, he or she will never change my friend, and they will never see light in their life, they are doomed. A real ugly person Andrea, you are too soft and kind, hope you don't know someone like this ,she/he is too evil, reminds me of Snow Whites step mother! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 5/2/2021 7:01:00 AM

Such a great entry in U dear friend.. Great flow of words Andrea.. Best wishes and hugs.. ~ Ani

Marilene Evans

Date: 5/1/2021 7:57:00 PM

That's really ugly, a person with no heart, no soul. Excellent write!

Hilo Poet

Date: 5/1/2021 12:27:00 PM

That's why I don't take selfies -- egads! Frightful imagery, Andrea, best hopes, Aloha!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/1/2021 5:29:00 AM

It comes in many forms--ungodly--unjust---vicious---you said it so well, Andrea: Its existence utterly devoid!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 5/1/2021 4:59:00 AM

Oh! A nicely written one, Andrea, only you could have done such a topic beautifully:)

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/1/2021 2:44:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your U pleiades; well done, best wishes in the contest. Best regards and hugs

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 5/1/2021 12:04:00 AM

unseemly and uncouth to boot! Superb write, Andrea!

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/1/2021 9:12:00 AM

I really wanted to get uncouth into it too!!! Thanks, Unseeking Seeker.