Udacha - To Luck

Like the  gentle oak she stands strong  and slender, straight and sleek 
she will not bend nor break nor is she meek
Magnificent , mysterious ,wild and free 
because her fruit falls close , her offspring stands pretty as she 
 Softly glowing eyes ablaze in a fire of blue, 
Piercing ,teasing ,hypnotic and alluring 
A haunting beauty ,She stands tall in starry fields of lonely winter nights
While The pale moon sets against a velvet carpet of purple and white
Brown hair setting aflame the golden dawn of the oak after the long night 
She calls and I listen , all I need is a little luck and I will find 
Lost  amidst all the Russian passion and beauty ,a diamond among the rough 
For any man to find such a friend is more than enough
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Gregory Avatar
April 6, 2015 at 5:15 PM
More of the same please, nicely done
A   Avatar
April 5, 2015 at 3:40 PM
Hello JIm, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. Have yourself a Happy Easter ~Always & Forever~ LINDA
Kendrick Avatar
September 7, 2012 at 4:40 AM
Enjoyed reading this creative and descriptive work..Thanks for your presence at my work..Sara
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