Tyranny

And who makes false in time, the truth - Be it aggressors so complied with tyranny, that life does youth their motives . . . while the young are tried!

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Jane Bowen

Date: 6/14/2008 2:09:00 PM

WOW! Just stick to your guns darling! You have a beautiful way with words...as most POETS do...BUT...you are a fine one~! Especially to be featured here at the soup! Great job...I Loved your eloquence and form in this thought provoking write! Genious and brilliant it lays...Shouting to the reader that things must indeed change! Good to know you my soupie friend...take care of your heartmind...and know you are truly blessed with this talent! Always your friend at the shhhhoupie...jane;)

Crystal Seals

Date: 6/14/2008 7:37:00 AM

Hello Paula! congrats on your featured poem. B BLESS Crystal

Date: 6/10/2008 4:17:00 PM

Much said in just four lines. Unfortunately, it's too often true. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 6/10/2008 9:12:00 AM

Congratulations Paula on the featuring of your lyric "Tyranny." Vince