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Two Worlds Colliding

forces of evil
drop boulders in lake of love
pebbles expand hope

vitriolic words
appeal to lowest nature
rudderless leaders




james marshall goff
two worlds colliding contest

Copyright © James Marshall Goff | Year Posted 2012

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Doris Culverhouse Date: 9/7/2012 6:54:00 AM good one Jimbo!! Thanks for your comments....I am glad to know I encouraged you....I didn't realize it has been 3 years..... Login to Reply

Cindy Cayton Date: 9/5/2012 8:33:00 PM Nice senryu. Enjoyable evening read... Cindy Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 8/18/2012 2:31:00 PM Got a chuckle when I read it again..((()))!!!Congrats on your winning work..Sara Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 8/16/2012 5:55:00 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Russell's "Two Worlds Colliding" contest Jimbo. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 8/15/2012 11:46:00 PM JAMES, a warm congratulations in Russell Sivey's "Two Worlds Colliding " contest. had fun catching up with all the winners xox~ PD Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 8/12/2012 6:31:00 PM Love how you GOT the 3rd line to take the reader somewhere else so much in so few words. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/12/2012 11:13:00 AM Hey, CONGRATS to you on your win, and now I have to get ready for church!!! Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 8/12/2012 2:32:00 AM Jimbo congrats on your great win....David Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 8/11/2012 11:38:00 AM Great write, James! Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim Login to Reply

Richard Palmer Date: 8/11/2012 9:16:00 AM great write James Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 8/10/2012 8:14:00 AM Great work..Winner for sure if the contest hasn't been judged..Enjoyed reading this morn..Sara Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/9/2012 8:28:00 PM GREAT reflective senryu, james. I especially like the twist on that first one. Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/9/2012 9:42:00 AM Good, well done for the contest James - hope you win....luck....luck !!! - oxox huggs Anne-Lise :)) Login to Reply