James Marshall Goff Poet Senryu

Two Worlds Colliding

forces of evil
drop boulders in lake of love
pebbles expand hope

vitriolic words
appeal to lowest nature
rudderless leaders




james marshall goff
two worlds colliding contest

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Doris Culverhouse September 7, 2012 at 6:54 AM good one Jimbo!! Thanks for your comments....I am glad to know I encouraged you....I didn't realize it has been 3 years.....

Cindy Cayton September 5, 2012 at 8:33 PM Nice senryu. Enjoyable evening read... Cindy

Sara Kendrick August 18, 2012 at 2:31 PM Got a chuckle when I read it again..((()))!!!Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown August 16, 2012 at 5:55 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Russell's "Two Worlds Colliding" contest Jimbo. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A August 15, 2012 at 11:46 PM JAMES, a warm congratulations in Russell Sivey's "Two Worlds Colliding " contest. had fun catching up with all the winners xox~ PD

Debbie Guzzi August 12, 2012 at 6:31 PM Love how you GOT the 3rd line to take the reader somewhere else so much in so few words. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich August 12, 2012 at 11:13 AM Hey, CONGRATS to you on your win, and now I have to get ready for church!!!

David Williams August 12, 2012 at 2:32 AM Jimbo congrats on your great win....David

Kim Merryman August 11, 2012 at 11:38 AM Great write, James! Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim

Richard Palmer August 11, 2012 at 9:16 AM great write James

Sara Kendrick August 10, 2012 at 8:14 AM Great work..Winner for sure if the contest hasn't been judged..Enjoyed reading this morn..Sara

Andrea Dietrich August 9, 2012 at 8:28 PM GREAT reflective senryu, james. I especially like the twist on that first one.

Anne-Lise Andresen August 9, 2012 at 9:42 AM Good, well done for the contest James - hope you win....luck....luck !!! - oxox huggs Anne-Lise :))