Carrie Richards Poet Senryu

Two Worlds Colliding

a tranquil meadow 
dons a velvet lupine cloak...
bees swarm in dark clouds 

vast fields honeycombed
with flora and rabbit holes...
hawks swoop down for prey


By Carrie Richards......For Russell Sivey's Contest: Two Worlds Colliding

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Sara Kendrick August 18, 2012 at 2:34 PM Great description of beauty..((()))!!!Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown August 16, 2012 at 5:53 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Russell's "Two Worlds Colliding" contest Carrie. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A August 15, 2012 at 11:41 PM CARRIE, a warm congratulations in Russell Sivey's "Two Worlds Colliding " contest. had fun catching up with all the winners xox~ PD

Andrea Dietrich August 14, 2012 at 7:03 PM wow, marvelous senryu!! conflicts within nature beautifully penned.

Harry Horsman August 14, 2012 at 10:07 AM belated congrats, wonderful entry and winner.

Debbie Guzzi August 12, 2012 at 6:28 PM Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

David Williams August 12, 2012 at 2:31 AM Carrie congrats on your great win....love the image of this one..David

Kim Merryman August 11, 2012 at 11:36 AM Beautiful imagery, Carrie. Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim

Debbie Guzzi August 8, 2012 at 6:38 PM Life and death yup! the beat goes on! Light & Love

Tim Ryerson August 8, 2012 at 6:04 PM 'don's a velvet lupine cloak'...my favorite of 6 exquisite lines...great work as usual, Carrie! - Tim