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Two Worlds Colliding

ONE five-minute break
at work playing games, mistake
exaggerated

butterfly dreams cease
cocoon gone in a heartbeat
catepillar weeps


8/5/12
For Russell's "Two Worlds Colliding" contest
Black Eyed Susan

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Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 10/19/2012 7:52:00 AM Thanking you today for your comments on my writing Susan. I hope you have a very pleasant weekend and I wish to see more of your work next week. Love, Carol XXXX Login to Reply

Matthew Anish Date: 9/11/2012 1:41:00 PM What are the two worlds colliding? I like this work but feel some explaining is needed here. Let me know what the two worlds are! Peace & love Matthew Anish Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 8/18/2012 2:20:00 PM Congrats on your winning work..Sara Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 8/16/2012 6:02:00 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Russell's "Two Worlds Colliding" contest Susan. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 8/15/2012 11:43:00 PM SWEET SUSAN, a warm congratulations in Russell Sivey's "Two Worlds Colliding " contest. had fun catching up with all the winners xox~ PD Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/14/2012 7:50:00 PM Belated congratulations, Susan. I remember this creative poem from earlier. Hope to see an email from you tonight! Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 8/12/2012 2:36:00 AM Susan congrats on your great win....will email some today..David Login to Reply

Olusegun Arowolo Date: 8/11/2012 5:54:00 PM Superb write,Susan.Great job,nice going.,Congrats on your win.. Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 8/11/2012 4:08:00 PM Interesting contrasts. Congrats on your win, Susan! Love, Kim Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 8/11/2012 8:57:00 AM great write...congrats on your win Susan Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/8/2012 3:06:00 PM Susan, this is sure creative. I really like that second one and the metaphor of the butterfly and caterpillar. thanks for my win. I'm glad you liked what i wrote. LUv, andrea Login to Reply

Justin Bordner Date: 8/6/2012 10:45:00 PM This elicits thoughts of perished innocence - I can relate to this sentiment at this moment - thank you Susan - J.A.B. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 8/6/2012 2:49:00 PM Ahh!..Enjoyed this creative and expressive work..Thanks for stopping by my blog..Hubby still doing good..Some pain but not too bad..Sara Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/5/2012 1:23:00 PM Good writing by a skilled lady, and a win for the contest. - Have a beautiful new week B.E.S. - oxox love // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 8/5/2012 12:43:00 PM Susan I like your take on this one, good luck..David will email you tomo. Login to Reply