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'two Worlds Colliding'

unfathomable 
emotions move to and fro 
an exploration 

I came across you 
reassurance, I now found 
I breathe easily  

Contest Name: Two Worlds Colliding
For Russell Sivey
By : Wilma Neels

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Copyright © Wilma Neels | Year Posted 2012

happinesshopelovesenryu

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Poet Destroyer A

December 24, 2012 at 8:55 PM

Wilma, Once again, we find ourselves trapped in the Holiday Season. And, hear I am stopping by to say Hi and to wish you a Merry Christmas once again sincerely from my heart. Loving each moment I found comforting here on the soup. Thank you for any comment or support you have offered now or in the past. Love always & forever ~ PD

August 20, 2012 at 2:35 AM

Interesting contrasts... congratulations on your win... Terry

August 18, 2012 at 2:41 PM

Creative topic..Enjoyed reading..Congrats on your win..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

August 16, 2012 at 5:51 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Russell's "Two Worlds Colliding" contest Wilma. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

August 15, 2012 at 11:40 PM

WILMA, a warm congratulations in Russell Sivey's "Two Worlds Colliding " contest. had fun catching up with all the winners xox~ PD

Andrea Dietrich

August 14, 2012 at 7:42 PM

can't believe I ever missed seeing this one. Big congrats to you. An awesome job.

August 12, 2012 at 6:21 PM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

August 12, 2012 at 2:28 AM

Wilma congrats on your great win....you smoothie..David

August 11, 2012 at 11:29 AM

Well done, Wilma! Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim

Michael J. Falotico

August 5, 2012 at 7:34 AM

Very thought provoking piece my CTH.... SHort sweet and speaks volumes.. LOve it hun...Ok another kiss blown your way!! xoox Michael

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

August 4, 2012 at 8:53 AM

Love this one, Wilma, ..it tells a lot, love,:) Jag

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 3, 2012 at 10:21 AM

Just beautiful Wilma......it`s an art to say much in a short Senryu poem - bravo!!! - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox love//Anne-Lise :)

August 3, 2012 at 9:11 AM

Wow!Excellent senryu here Wilma!Love it!

Pace Ink-U-Script

August 3, 2012 at 7:46 AM

Oh wow...this is really really awesome...good luck in the contest...wow..I love your words here!!!

August 3, 2012 at 3:49 AM

tour images haunts so beautifully, wilms... best of luck!..:) huggs!

August 3, 2012 at 3:26 AM

very sweet write:)

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