Two Worlds

Two Worlds There are two worlds I live in Side by side… living and breathing One often seen whilst the other only seem Do they see what I see deem believing? I do see the conditions living the real I do see my imagined world living amongst I do see the conditioned living having to deal And I do imagine to have everything and nothing to want Nothing last like all living things In my lifetime… I don’t think we are taught right To be instilled with achievements and means Life is nothing more but a being that might To be one in a population… what is new? To be no one in a population… do we shy? Living in reality… what’s the given cue? Living in dreams… will realities’ die? I chose my own side of the world to live in Living and breathing… imagining and dreaming What only seem has become what I have seen Because in my world, I see my dreams worth believing 26/10/2022

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Yehoshua Yochanan

Date: 10/18/2023 8:02:00 AM

I really love this Poem! This is exactly what I feel everyday. I contemplate reality and I see comfort in the worlds inside my mind. The way you write your poem, the words used, and the way you construct your sentences are exactly the type of poetry that I find beautiful. Every line in your poem is like an independent poem of its own, its like your poem is a riddle. I aspire to write like this. I'll be following you and read your poems. I really like it!

Joel Lee
Date: 10/19/2023 3:52:00 PM

I’m glad u enjoy my piece… been writing for many many years and you are right to say that my pieces are like a form of a riddle. Perhaps like a question with never the answer. :)