two women on a seesaw

two women on a seesaw laughing their happy heads off
Like male praying mantises, except they did not scoff
wearing dresses and high heels which was absurd
Their husbands Phil and Lee walked by, without saying a word

Pretending they do not know their wives imbibe during the day
Something hard to not realize if you are looking their way
They were arguing now about whose seesaw was the best.
They were both on the same one, so it was no real test.

Let’s go to a ballgame, suggested Phil to his friend Lee.
They had no argument from their Gladys or Sammy.
Arguing now about whether the seesaw was blue or red.
Let’s stop by and pick up my favorite cousin, Fred.
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Allison Avatar
January 18, 2024 at 10:42 PM
ha ha ha this is great fun Karen, the imagery of the ladies is just hilarious and the thought of them being like praying mantises is pure genius! hugs jan xx
Krutsinger Avatar
January 19, 2024 at 6:02 PM
thank you Jan. It was inspired by the BEST illustration by I have no rights to publish it.
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