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Two Way Ticket

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                     Eager to return

                 he waits for the evening tide

                     Crusty globetrotter

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Line Gauthier

April 16, 2018 at 10:16 PM

Cute, Carrie.

Carolyn Devonshire

April 25, 2010 at 7:42 AM

Great haiku, Carrie. Especially loved the last line!! Congratulations on your win. Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

April 24, 2010 at 7:09 PM

ps I forgot to say it was really cute. I was gonna use the word crusty too, but didn't!

Andrea Dietrich

April 24, 2010 at 7:08 PM

congratulations, Carrie. I did not fare well in this one at all! Luv, andrea

Laura Mckenzie

April 24, 2010 at 7:07 PM

Carrie~ Congratulations on your win in Raul"s contest! Love Laura :)

James Marshall Goff

April 24, 2010 at 3:35 PM

better by sea than air! these days! BRAVO! Carrie! and thanks for your warm comments! jimbo

Mitch White

April 24, 2010 at 2:11 PM

This is great Carrie, Congrats on your win- globetrotter lol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 24, 2010 at 1:41 PM

Congrats Carrie on your winning poem in the Journey contest... perfect words to feature for the photo..luv.. Linda-Marie

Audrey Haick

April 24, 2010 at 1:40 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful win in The Journey Contest, Carrie!! Enjoy! Peace, Audrey

Raul Moreno

April 24, 2010 at 1:28 PM

Carrie, congratulations on your success in my contest...Raul

Daver Austin

April 24, 2010 at 10:15 AM

YOu must be thinking of that bottle cast off by a lonely, stranded islander. In this case, the bottle has a personality. Shades of C. Dickens. Like this one mucho. Love, daver