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Two Views On Spring

1. Eternal Spring O Peaceful trees Permit the bees To raid your flowers As they please And let the breeze Play with your leaves Before they meet Old winter’s freeze And waft your fragrance Everywhere And strew your petals in my hair For spring will bring it all And let you Squander it again. 2. As Seasons Go Lifeless Dormant in the ground Stick- like to my view And yet in spring Yourself will you renew And leaves and fruit abound Rejoicing in the dew And verdant will your vines Bring forth The possibility Of nectar sweet your winter wines Will bring me ecstacy. Return to dormancy Content I’ll be To let you mark the seasons For eternity And me. Brian Strand's All Yours (March 4) contest placed 1st

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Date: 3/5/2021 5:46:00 AM
So lovely and descriptive, Suzanne! CONGRATS on your win. Janice
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/6/2021 5:14:00 AM
Hi Janice: So glad you enjoyed these musings on the miracle of spring. Best, SuZ
Date: 3/4/2021 7:02:00 PM
Beautiful write Suzanne, Congrats on your win
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/6/2021 5:13:00 AM
Good Morning Joseph and thanks for your visit. Spring is coming here in N C. My daffodils bloomed this week. SuZ
Date: 6/28/2014 8:17:00 AM
Two perfect views, Suzanne... Well done!.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 6/3/2014 5:53:00 PM
I found both to be very, very nice! Bravo!!!!!!!
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Date: 4/30/2014 2:21:00 AM
Oh Suz, your second poem brought it all home to me and I had a feeling of content, something only fall usually brings. Lovely, both of them! Please share this at PFT.
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Date: 4/26/2014 4:08:00 PM
Both views are blooming with beauty. Anticipating the next spring brings a treat all its own.
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Date: 4/25/2014 9:02:00 PM
I like both views,Suz. Very nice poem. How is life treating you these days?
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Date: 4/23/2014 2:53:00 AM
Suzanne, Hi. Don't think we've met, but I like your writes. Nicely done, my friend. Drop by sometime. Peace, Mel :)
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Date: 4/20/2014 10:28:00 PM
And 2 lovely poems, I just hope spring comes this year, both of them seem late!!! LOL
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Date: 4/20/2014 4:44:00 PM
Beautifully captured... Spring is so welcome this year and you have made me sense so much in your lines.
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Date: 4/20/2014 7:59:00 AM
- All "wake up" to new life - both nature and humans - A beautiful picture of nature Suzanne ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/20/2014 4:35:00 AM
Both the views quite appealing, suzanne
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