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Two Views on Spring

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Two Views on Spring

Eternal Spring

O Peaceful trees
Permit the bees
To raid your flowers
As they please
And let the breeze
Play with your leaves
Before they meet 
Old winter’s freeze
And waft your fragrance
And strew your petals in my hair
For spring will bring it all
And let you 
Squander it again.

As Seasons Go

Dormant in the ground
Stick- like to my view 
And yet in spring
Yourself will you renew
And leaves and fruit abound
Rejoicing in the dew
And verdant will your vines 
Bring forth
The possibility
Of nectar sweet your winter wines
Will bring me ecstacy.
Return to dormancy 
Content I’ll be
To let you mark the seasons
For eternity
And me.

Suzanne Delaney 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Date: 6/28/2014 8:17:00 AM
Two perfect views, Suzanne... Well done!.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 6/3/2014 5:53:00 PM
I found both to be very, very nice! Bravo!!!!!!!
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Date: 4/30/2014 2:21:00 AM
Oh Suz, your second poem brought it all home to me and I had a feeling of content, something only fall usually brings. Lovely, both of them! Please share this at PFT.
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Date: 4/26/2014 4:08:00 PM
Both views are blooming with beauty. Anticipating the next spring brings a treat all its own.
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Date: 4/25/2014 9:02:00 PM
I like both views,Suz. Very nice poem. How is life treating you these days?
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Date: 4/23/2014 2:53:00 AM
Suzanne, Hi. Don't think we've met, but I like your writes. Nicely done, my friend. Drop by sometime. Peace, Mel :)
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Date: 4/20/2014 10:28:00 PM
And 2 lovely poems, I just hope spring comes this year, both of them seem late!!! LOL
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Date: 4/20/2014 4:44:00 PM
Beautifully captured... Spring is so welcome this year and you have made me sense so much in your lines.
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Date: 4/20/2014 7:59:00 AM
- All "wake up" to new life - both nature and humans - A beautiful picture of nature Suzanne ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/20/2014 4:35:00 AM
Both the views quite appealing, suzanne
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