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Two versions of STILL

1. I miss you still, all’s hurt and weeping, shrouding orb and stars, while nourishments a pot of poisoned love that in my desperation I consume cold on the ash of angers fiery words. 1. I sift and rake love’s cinders so to find some fragments to construct a fragile chain to fasten me to you and you to love, treat tender, lead me into warmth from chill, I love you still 2 FULL RHYME VERSION I miss you still all’s hurt and weep as I the past distill, while nourishments a pot of poisoned love that I consume and never can tire of cold on the ash of angers fiery words. That ash I sift and rake for I am spurred to make from fragments there a fragile chain that fastens us once more in love’s domain. Treat tender dear, come into warmth from chill, I love you still.

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Date: 10/29/2017 2:06:00 PM
Do we ever stop loving someone? Well expressed Rick..
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rick howarth
Date: 10/29/2017 5:54:00 PM
Thank you for reading and commenting. Much appreciated sentiment