Njeri Hunjeri Poet Haiku

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Bermuda triangle
Is bizzare
Oh look! I think I found a car

*the above written by 10 year old*

Bermuda triangle
Phenomenal curvature 
A natural force of mystery

*this one by me. I think the 10 year def won:))

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Sara Kendrick March 5, 2015 at 8:52 AM Interesting comparison..Good job..Thanks for stopping by..Sara Njeri Hunjeri March 6, 2015 at 12:02 AM Thank you so much Sara

Tim Smith March 4, 2015 at 11:33 PM Lol...you are right....the twist does it....Tim Njeri Hunjeri March 5, 2015 at 11:59 PM Yep, it seems like the 10 yr old figured out cars can be found in Bermuda triangle. Lol. Thank you Tim