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Bermuda triangle Is bizzare Oh look! I think I found a car *the above written by 10 year old* Bermuda triangle Phenomenal curvature A natural force of mystery *this one by me. I think the 10 year def won:))

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Date: 3/5/2015 8:52:00 AM
Interesting comparison..Good job..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 3/6/2015 12:02:00 AM
Thank you so much Sara
Date: 3/4/2015 11:33:00 PM
Lol...you are right....the twist does it....Tim
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 3/5/2015 11:59:00 PM
Yep, it seems like the 10 yr old figured out cars can be found in Bermuda triangle. Lol. Thank you Tim

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