John Freeman Poet Rhyme

"two Trees...Two Logics"

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In the garden. The cause…for need of a pardon
Two trees….two logics..
Only one the head…of the Godly project...

The dualistic…Logic…not love. From above..
Being a lower logic….of mind’s project..
A death logic….dualistic of the mind’s project

For `t is good and evil….by the which….death is thrust..
At the mind…that trust…in death’s lust..
For `t is death the mind has thrust…at humanity…it’s minus and plus..

By it’s reality…the technically…of choice.. is voiced..
By Adam and Eve…this choice…was conceived..
The bitter pill….necessity of Love’s…free will..

Then strife begin to build…by mind choice..  dualistic pill…
For from it’s mind….humanity doth live…death’s ill..
But...by grace intervene…Love is again seen..

And as higher consciousness…begins to build..
Lifting up of mind…from the bitter pill…is sealed..
As love’s purpose is filled…by Love’s choice…humanity’s voice..
Picks up Love’s chorus….Love’s higher logic….heaven’s project!!

11-29-09 [email protected]

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen December 15, 2009 at 7:42 PM Hi Moses. It is GREAT to be back. Goodness and mercy are everlasting. And God, has sealed the deal for sure. Thank you for spending your heart and mind on learning and understanding God. We are blessed by reading and pondering your poems. Thank you for sharing goodness with us. Smiling Big... even though I can't hop in that big ole Ford yet. Lovingly, Dane Ann

James Marshall Goff December 15, 2009 at 3:31 AM incredible, poetic expressions of the Path! thanks John! and thanks also for your kind comments, jimbo

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 14, 2009 at 7:10 PM Excellent ... stellar write ... poignant message... choices are not always easy ... spiritual thinking should come first... thankxx for sharing and for your always inspiring comments on all my poetry Moses... u are a blessing to me.. and others..... back to u with blessings... luv... your support is appreciated towards me and my writings... Linda-Marie...

Richard Pickett December 14, 2009 at 10:25 AM Very provocative Piece here John, Makes the mind seem to want to wander off into many different directions...... Nicely done.

Colleen Bono December 13, 2009 at 7:34 PM I have a new poem posted

Doris Culverhouse December 13, 2009 at 4:38 PM Moses, you still got it! Keep the creativity going.

Audrey Haick December 13, 2009 at 3:38 PM Deep. Reminder of man's fall and God's forgiveness and grace! God's grace being the the second Adam-Jesus Christ who intervened! Great job, JohnMoses. Thank you for taking the time to read my poems and comment on them! I wish you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year filled with God's blessings! Peace and love, Audrey

Carolyn Devonshire December 13, 2009 at 3:23 PM We sometimes fail to realize it, John, but we DO have choices that can lead us to a loving world and eternal life. "Love's higher logic" is quite a powerful message to share, especially this time of year. May you have a blessed Christmas, Moses! Love, Carolyn

John Freeman December 13, 2009 at 9:33 AM PS. If anyone has a similar question as Caroline had here. Check out her poem "Reverence" I have explained my poem there in comments on her poem. Don't forget to comment on her poem. Smile, Love, Moses Have a Merry One!

Caroline Cécile Delacroix December 12, 2009 at 11:27 PM The course of history is definitely a course to restore love, Christ being the ultimate example, the true olive tree. It is interesting that you see the trees in the Garden of Eden as dualistic minds. I believe one represents the hope of man (Adam's hope to reach the tree of life), oneness with God's love and the tree of the K of G & E, Eve, who has not reached that oneness yet. Thought provoking write, Moses. Thanks for sharing. Love and blessings, Caroline.