Dan Kearley Poet Rhyme

Two Tickets To Heaven

If I could give you two tickets to heaven,
 who would be the two people you would choose?
Might it be your loving Mother or Father,
 or your adorable children if you only had two?
Maybe your Grandma and Grandpa,
 who were watching over you, their whole lives through?
Or possibly a couple of old friends,
 that you grew up with since the young age of two?
How about your sister and brother,
 who were with you as you grew?
A husband, wife or a loving aunt or uncle,
 with so many possibilities it's really difficult to choose.
You see, to me it wouldn't really matter,
 because I'm already giving my two tickets to you.



Dan Kearley: 5-13-14

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Funom Makama March 26, 2015 at 11:59 AM You kept me on the edge of my seat from start to finish.. Thought provoking and I tend to agree with Devnah's clue

Bl Devnath September 26, 2014 at 1:21 PM It's a thought provoking poem where various alternatives are given. But you have already given two tickets means two children to your wife, I think. Your wife is a mother of your children,hence a heaven of your children. Lovely done, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl

Carol Sunshine Brown July 22, 2014 at 1:12 PM Very thought provoking write you have here Dan. I enjoyed reading it and I know it will stay on my mind for quite a while. Have a wonderful day and keep sharing with us. Love, Carol

Lucilla Carrillo July 22, 2014 at 12:15 PM Danny; This is a great poem with tough questions. First I want to say thank you for the tickets. After thinking a while I think I will pass them on to someone that really needs them... Have a great day... Lucilla

Jasonpoet Boyd July 8, 2014 at 11:42 AM Hey bud very thought provoking and kind

Debbie Duncan July 1, 2014 at 8:48 PM cute poem, not sure who I would give it to :)

Cecilia Macfarlane June 19, 2014 at 9:32 PM A sweet sentiment, I would give mine to the elderly so they could go without suffering. Awesome write Dan. Hugs

Poet Destroyer A May 14, 2014 at 11:45 AM Dan, I love the flow of, very sweet..PD

Jan Allison May 13, 2014 at 4:13 PM Am hanging onto my place on earth for now - love this poem :-) Hugs Jan xxx

Casarah Nance May 13, 2014 at 12:49 PM Cute read Dan. Hope there is more than two spots in heaven left for us. :-P