Two Teddy Bears With One Heart

Two teddy bears with one heart,between them have a powerful,lasting love.

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/20/2018 2:50:00 PM

I like monoku, and this one is sweet.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/22/2018 12:49:00 PM

Hello Caren, I also like monoku. This poem was fun to write. have a nice day my friend.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/19/2018 5:50:00 PM

this is very sweet.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/19/2018 6:47:00 PM

Hello Andrea, thank you. I have a figurine of two teddy bears with one big heart between them filled with love that will last forever. Have a nice evening my friend.

Alfred Berggren

Date: 9/15/2018 3:16:00 PM

Hi Dar, What's that old jingle -" two's a couple, three's a crowd, four's too many. and five's not allowed". Two's a perfect number. Your poem couldn't be better.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/16/2018 11:46:00 AM

Hello Alfred, yes you got that right. Thank you for the lovely comment. have a nice day my friend.

Erik Spector

Date: 9/14/2018 4:44:00 PM

If the one teddy bear jumps the other teddy bear, is it a heart attack between the two of them? Just thought I would ask the expert.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/14/2018 5:16:00 PM

Hello Erik Spector, Oh you are funny. I had a good chuckle. No.... I am referring to a deep bond of love between two bears. Have a nice evening my friend.