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Two Tears That Met

Two tears that just met...
Our faces pressed oh so close...
Now we taste each other...

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Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet

June 5, 2012 at 2:44 AM

Wonderfully weaved poem your amazing!!!

Black Eyed Susan

June 2, 2012 at 2:39 PM

so very intimate...nice :)

Wilma Neels

May 16, 2012 at 11:52 AM

Another beauty from you MJF :) hope your week's been good! *hugs* CTH

Joann Grisetti

May 15, 2012 at 7:32 PM

two friends that just met/faces stare around each other/ideas passed by eyes

Joann Grisetti

May 15, 2012 at 7:30 PM

two friends that just met/faces stare around each other/ideas passed by eyes

Cindy Lu

May 15, 2012 at 10:48 AM

aww. nicely done Michael.

Charmaine Chircop

May 14, 2012 at 6:27 AM

This is very sentimental Michael... Charma

Carolyn Devonshire

May 13, 2012 at 5:27 PM

Just remembering how it felt to be this close to someone brought tears to my eyes, Michael. So beautiful! Love, carolyn

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

May 13, 2012 at 12:33 PM

A beautiful, emotive senryu, Michael! I love the image it evokes. Thanks so much for your kind comment on my tanka yesterday. I'm glad you liked it. Hopefully, I will have time later to write for your contest. It seems to be filling fast. Enjoy your Sunday. Blessings, Rhonda

Harry Horsman

May 13, 2012 at 4:31 AM

love this wonderful Senryu Michael, the poem is so visual. harry

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

May 12, 2012 at 10:39 PM

Ah, how beautiful when that happens... Where tears are the medium in which hearts meet. Beautiful, Michael! Thanks for dropping by, missed hearing from you! Hugs to you! Hehe NTS :D

Bl Devnath

May 12, 2012 at 3:20 PM

So sweet your two tears, lovely done. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 12, 2012 at 12:47 PM

Sooo sweet and beautiful lines Michael, love it. - oxox hugs Anne-Lise

Andrea Dietrich

May 12, 2012 at 10:29 AM

This is very imaginative, Michael! Great image. I'm ok. Shoulder hurting as usual, but I'm going to the gym to swim laps shortly. Maybe it will actually make me feel better. (I always swim on my back, which doesn't bother me). Have a lovely weekend. Andrea