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Two Streams that Converge

Two streams that converge
   And flow inextricably
Are like two lovers
   Meandering about who meet -

Not knowing anything of what
   They were missing before
But now having full sight
   Each of the other -

Who rejoice at the freshet
   And meld and flow as one
Assured of their fate
   And their continual love.

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Date: 5/2/2024 11:47:00 AM
Dear Amy, You have beautifully portrayed the merging of two souls, each finding completeness in the other's presence. I loved how your imagery of streams flowing inexorably together mirrors the deep connection between lovers who discover a sense of fulfillment and unity in their union. Your poem captures the essence of love's transformative power, where two individuals find solace and joy in each other's embrace. - Blessings, Daniel
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