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Two Sides of Showers

rain taps on grasses

dancing between pinkish toes

…cool ripples lull nights

 

more hard showers pound

flooding dampened moods non-stop

… gloomy dusk-eye frowns


What Makes You Smile, What Makes You Frown
Contest of Michael Falotico

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Bl Devnath

September 7, 2012 at 11:05 AM

Congrats on your win, my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich

September 6, 2012 at 3:02 PM

a very well deserved win, Nette. BIG congrats

Poet Destroyer A

September 5, 2012 at 7:38 PM

Nette. , congratulations, with your senryu in Michael's "Smiles & Frown" contest.. God Bless~PD

Andrew Crisci

September 5, 2012 at 11:42 AM

Congratulations on your big win, Nette in Michael's contest, " What Makes You Smile, What Makes You Frown ". Like a painter inspired by Nature, you see with your poetic eyes the beauty that no one sees and turn it into a masterpiece. I have enjoyed reading your poem of " cool ripples lull nights ". Best wishes for a continued success. Love, Andrew.

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 5, 2012 at 5:23 AM

Congratulations on the super win in Michael's contest Nette. Love, Carol

Gwendolen Song

September 3, 2012 at 1:11 PM

Gotta love that first senryu the most, Nette! Rain tapping on grass and dancing is grand imagery for me! It tickles my poetic senses immensely! Enjoyed this winning write!:) gwendolen

Joann Grisetti

September 3, 2012 at 9:47 AM

I lioke the way you differentiate between 'good' and 'bad' rain. Congratulations.

Debbie Guzzi

September 3, 2012 at 9:42 AM

nice nette true to form too ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

September 3, 2012 at 9:04 AM

congrats Nette luv on sweet success with this outstanding write and win .. way to go ..

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

September 3, 2012 at 6:53 AM

Congratulations once again nette, well done pinkish toes, how cute is that.... xx

Michael J. Falotico

September 3, 2012 at 6:51 AM

Very good!!! Congrats Nette my dear sweet friend... hugs n luv Michael

Harry Horsman

September 1, 2012 at 3:34 PM

love your theme nette, rain dancing between pinkish toes, wow, iike that. good luck in contest.

Poet Destroyer A

September 1, 2012 at 1:40 PM

Nette, how true...love it..pd

Jack Horne

September 1, 2012 at 1:20 PM

love this beautiful write, Nette - friends/colleagues think I'm mad but I just love rain, the heavier the better. Yes, lol, Sue and I loved Burton's Corpse Bride - Sue always cries at the end : )

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

September 1, 2012 at 4:53 AM

a fine analogy Nette luv in lines featuring rain .. awesome visual excitement .. good luck .. oh heard bout Tsuami in Philippines on new .. ru OK? did it affect u? please be safe my friend .. Issac has left havoc on 4 States and remnants headed our way starting today into next week .. thinking of u with prayerful heart ..

Skat A

August 31, 2012 at 1:21 PM

Good luck in the contest' SKAT

Joann Grisetti

August 31, 2012 at 1:21 PM

Imaginative pairing. Hope you have no reason to frown from this earthquake. Is all well?

Andrea Dietrich

August 31, 2012 at 12:30 PM

a very unique and creative way to do the entry by doing those two very different sides of showers!

Russell Sivey

August 31, 2012 at 11:45 AM

This is a perfect example of feelings that are associated with a smile and a frown...Your images bring to life both powerful symbols! Awesome creation here my friend, Great Work!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 31, 2012 at 11:22 AM

SMILE POETRY CONTEST!! And you are ready with your pen Nette. Love it - Good luck in this contest as well. I am "empty" ink ..... oxox love Anne-Lise :)