Two Shillings

I carried two shillings, one for each eye,
For my love was a dying soul.
When she left I kissed her goodbye -
Covered her eyes to soften death's toll.

2-28-20
Contest: Poe Etic Verse
Sponsor: Charles Messina
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Rodrigues Avatar
March 4, 2020 at 2:31 PM
I love how you started this! Congrats on a great write!
Bradfield Avatar
March 8, 2020 at 1:28 AM
Thank you, Kim!!
Messina Avatar
March 4, 2020 at 6:09 AM
I am not surprised to see you on my winners list, Larry. Great verse, my friend. Congratulations on your winning poem. Best wishes.. Charlie
Bradfield Avatar
March 8, 2020 at 1:29 AM
Thank you Charlie! Enjoyed the challenge and thanks for the placement
Somadas Avatar
March 2, 2020 at 9:17 PM
Wow..Superb..Sheer poetry.. Congrats on your wonderful win..
Bradfield Avatar
March 8, 2020 at 1:29 AM
Thank you,sir!
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