Two Seasons

As I walked beside the water, feeding ducks and skimming stones,
I was whistling to the weather and the winter wind that moans.
Dreaming dreams of summer sunshine with you walking by my side,
In a land across the ocean, on the beach above the tide.
There was snow across the treetops and the ducks were glad to feed
And the sun so weak and wat'ry that it lacked the heat we need.
But my dreams were warm and balmy filled with ocean breeze and spray;
As I walked beside the lakeside on that chilly winter's day.

As I strolled across the hilltops feeling icy winds that try
To assault the lonely walker and bring teardrops to his eye.
I was not a whit distracted from the dreams that filled my head
Of a walk in summer sunshine where a foreign sheep track lead.
With the views of snow-filled valleys like some massive Christmas card,
I was lifted to the heavens, though the climb was rather hard,
But my dreams were filled with walking on some lazy summer hills,
And the thought of you beside me was a cure for all my ills.

In the woods of winter magic, where the trunks are ghostly souls,
I was walking in the snowscape dreaming dreams of happy goals.
Of a land of forest flowers and a smell of warming pine
With my arm around a lover who has whispered that she's mine.
All the days of winter beauty fade like visions meeting dawn,
As I dream of summer sunshine when perhaps I shall be born
In a life of sweet renewal and a second chance to be
Just the sweet contented poet that I think is really me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 8/16/2009 9:41:00 AM
This is a wonderful, awesome piece, I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. You are a great friend. Adeleke
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Date: 8/11/2009 3:41:00 AM
a great write, congratulations on your featured poem God bless you from diane
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Date: 8/10/2009 2:59:00 PM
Astounding and beautiful write here, Jeff!! Thanks to the PoetrySoup staff for this wonderful selection to be featured this week. Congratulations, Jeff. I look forward to reading more of your writes and if I haven't told you already, welcome to PoetrySoup!!
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Date: 8/10/2009 4:40:00 AM
Jeff - I wish to congratulate you on having your poetry featured this week – God bless you, MJ
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Date: 8/10/2009 3:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. May you have many more Jeff. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/9/2009 1:36:00 PM
Congratulations on being featured, Jeff. Oh sweet contented poet who wrote this sweet sweet poem. Keep writing! DAS-J
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Date: 8/9/2009 1:18:00 PM
Nice use of rhyme and imagery. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 3/31/2009 12:24:00 PM
You write with so much passion and heart. Truly the work of a great poet. I really enjoy reading your work. Smiles from Lolita
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