Two Scoops

Hey raisin, shall I tell you the tale?
Tell us of where history and news failed
to share truth? Be the sleuth and unveil?

Okay then, here's your two scoops...

Believe they say in a day when God's wrath
will find his way to you? Believe in destruction
death, plunder and confusion too? Chaos you say?
Here's a day you'll never forget...
I'll even bet.

Your God is here, walking the talk,
checking the parks and asking the lark,
did you hear? Did you read the book?
Didn't need it all, just one look...

"We are created..."
"In the image of..."

The rest lost to fallen egos "from above".

We call Him 'man'. Given a garden,
a song, a land... given two hands to hold,
a heart given as the color of Gold.

Given a rainbow, to remind us...
"We are created... as the image of trust"

"As above so below" they say
getting it wrong, never went that way.

"As above, we Are, Love"

I'd write that One down, if I were you...
Today.

"Define my wrath..."
Sure... she laughs.
Sure, she crafts, the messages.
Sure, She's a nut in a bubble of images...
Sure.
You can bet.
Here's another you won't forget...

"We are Two... got that? In the scoops?"


"Knock knock... we're Both home."


Believe they say in a day when Gods
will find Their way to you?
Hear.
Is the day you'll never forget...
I'll even bet.


5.13

!with a big fat eraser and some beers...
we met.

N ine is the line,
E leven the mind and
T hirteen. Is the rhyme.

and 12 ...
"Time catches us..."
She's a NET

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 5/16/2009 8:41:00 AM
with a bit o' acrostic thrown-in! nice! Jim
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Date: 5/15/2009 6:48:00 AM
Curious, creative, amusing, poignant, left me pondering... nice one Izzy ... ps thanks for the comments
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Date: 5/14/2009 6:48:00 PM
This is very creative. I like the flow of the words and the message. Your imagination is certainly at work in this piece. If you would like to read more of my Epulaeryu and haiku poems, check out my blog on the "2009 Best Christian Poetry Award" on the site. You will love the readings. Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 5/14/2009 10:58:00 AM
Your poems are always written so creatively and never fail to lift our spirits, Izzy. Love the thought of time being a "net" that catches us. Very true! Love, carolyn
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