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Two Points

the tether frays that once held strong
from the days and nights of being alone
like a shooting star 'cross the evening sky
flashing brilliantly before it dies
blackness fills its spot

given permission you entered inside
shaking up everything I tried to hide
oxidation ruins the places we've been
the sloppy shot circles and still falls in
two points added to your score

like a train wreck with much devastation
I sift through the pieces from our gestation
salvaging nothing, not one small part
you leave nothing for my heart
blackness fills that spot

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/15/2010 8:14:00 AM
so very sad...yet we do feel this way ..way too often Light & Love!
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