"two Pennies's"

The two of us roll like pennies's down the street...
Aimlessly searching for a random place to meet...
Will our rolling journey cross paths with no bump's...
We may scatter in the walks but still land on our rump's
Up and down the hills we go, eyes still watching the other's road...
Side by side is where we will gather, because my eyes on you is
what matter's...
Back to the register is where we land, pressed against each other 
hand and hand...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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July 11, 2010 at 10:57 PM
well if i find a penny i will pick it up,,so hope both of you never split up,,Kidding.. i loved the poem..Nice on the thought and comparing your love to 2 pennies,,enjoyed,..p.d.
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July 11, 2010 at 7:48 AM
Oh how cute Michael.. enjoyed this two pennies analogy for two lovers.. just posted Love Found A Way this morning in the middle of judging my contest.. happy Sunday.. White Knight.. with luv..
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July 11, 2010 at 6:37 AM
Great romantic write...Great metaphoric language used...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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