Two Options

bodies of water
blue planet personified
to sink or to swim
July 18, 2014 Contest:Hiaku on probabilities Sponsor: Marvin Celestial
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A  Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 5:01 PM
I'm going with living...:)
A. Sharma Avatar
August 11, 2014 at 8:32 AM
Back again wid big congrats dear Arlene on this winning lovely haiku!
Chutani Avatar
August 9, 2014 at 11:13 AM
lovely take on the theme, Arlene. Mohan
Mehta Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 10:15 PM
Nice thought well expressed, Arlene. congrats
Allison Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 6:53 PM
lovely haiku congrats on your placement in the contest:-) Hugs jan x
Anish Avatar
August 5, 2014 at 8:06 PM
You stuck to the 5 7 5 format which is good. Our blue planet has room for poets it seems. Good job! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Dietrich Avatar
July 19, 2014 at 10:17 PM
I love how you made this a symbol for our way of surviving on the planet. VERy nicely done, my friend.
Smith Avatar
July 20, 2014 at 8:31 AM
Thanks, sweetie!.. Hugs.. Arlene
Nehls Avatar
July 19, 2014 at 9:09 PM
To sink or to swim. That pretty much sums it up, Arlene. Great haiku, my friend...... Robert.
Smith Avatar
July 19, 2014 at 9:23 PM
Thanks, dear Robert! Hugs... Arlene
Smith Avatar
July 19, 2014 at 8:24 AM
Thank you, Connie! Nice to meet you too.. Hope you find something you enjoy.. Hugs.. Arlene
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 19, 2014 at 3:24 AM
So original and sure to do well in the contest Arlene. I am off to read more of your work. Very nice to meet you!
Smith Avatar
July 19, 2014 at 8:28 AM
Connie! Your reply is above. Lol.. I do this often... :-)
A. Sharma Avatar
July 19, 2014 at 1:36 AM
Oh that's lovely Arlene! gl in contest !
Smith Avatar
July 19, 2014 at 8:22 AM
Thank you, dear Upma!.. Hugs.. Arlene
Horne Avatar
July 18, 2014 at 2:13 PM
clever haiku - sure to be a winner : )
Smith Avatar
July 18, 2014 at 2:15 PM
Thank you so much, dear Jack! Hugs... Arlene
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