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Two Monks

1 A glittering candle flame A candle flame does not flutter and is not extinguished for it is determined to glitter and not to be tarnished! Said “Dear devout Halt a moment and hark! Here is a blemish-less monk even in the dark!!” 2 Candle flame to monk A candle flame fluttered and vanished for, it wished not to be tarnished. Said, "Ye monk, mind your deeds black Character is what a man does dark!"

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Date: 10/9/2024 8:43:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/19/2016 10:58:00 PM
dr. vinze, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/20/2015 3:42:00 PM
Dr Hemant, stopped by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
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