Two Mallards In the City

Two eider pilgrims
scooping shadows like nestlings
under cedar wings
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Rodrigues Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 10:11 AM
Great ink, Dale!
Dietrich Avatar
May 31, 2017 at 12:49 AM
Very cool imagery in your KU, Dale.
Wood Avatar
May 30, 2017 at 5:06 PM
This is a fun one Dale. Strict adherence to the Haiku form. Those are difficult for me. Nicely done!
Cozart Avatar
May 30, 2017 at 6:22 PM
Thanks, Dean. I'm glad you liked it.
Green Avatar
May 30, 2017 at 12:15 PM
Nicely done Dale. I really liked this one.
Cozart Avatar
May 30, 2017 at 12:19 PM
Thanks, Chris. I always appreciate it.
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