Two Lovers

Through a meadow clothed in daffodils
Two lovers walk hand in hand
The birds are singing up in the trees
So sweet like a celestial band.

His hand it gently caresses her waist
As he whispers "I love you"
Her heart it beats a little faster
As she feels the same way too.

She gives his hand a gentle squeeze
As passion explodes inside
And with a gentle kiss she says
"I want to be your bride".

They come to the end of the meadow
As the sun sets behind a hill
"He says darling will you marry me"
"She says of course I will".
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Sweetheart Avatar
November 18, 2009 at 8:06 PM
Truly romanticism at its very best.. the "happy ending" story we are all looking for..u have written this so beautifully, Leon, and I so enjoyed immersing myself in this meadow... thankxxx for sharing.. luv.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
Kendrick Avatar
August 31, 2009 at 2:42 PM
Oh! So romantic and descriptive. Swoon, Swoon. Sara
Duhart Avatar
August 7, 2009 at 4:52 AM
Beautiful love story..Message Conveyed nicely.
Christian Avatar
July 12, 2009 at 5:34 AM
aww so sweet, a devotional write God bless you
Brown Avatar
July 8, 2009 at 9:31 AM
BEAUTIFUL POEM, Oh SO LOVELY!
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