Two Lost Souls

Too much pain she hurts,cries 
Way too much pain for anyone's eyes 
He walks in the door smacks her down 
She looks up at him with this frown 
Confused lost and alone 
No friend,feelings or thoughts of her own 
Too much pain she hurts,cries 
Way too much pain for anyone's eyes 
She sits alone sealed and hurt 
Waiting around for another out burst 
He has no control over himself 
Too much pain,pride to ask for help 
He feels like the worlds  on his shoulder 
He wants to hug and grieve and console her 
But rage seeks within his head 
So much pain too many regrets 
Too much pain she hurts,cries 
Way too much pain for anyone's eyes 
she prays real low 
And moves real slow 
Trying to keep her faith and hope 
He has no control over himself 
Too much pain,pride to ask for help 
Not realizing their doing the same thing 
Battling their burdens trying to maintain 
They hurt they cry 
Way too much pain for either one's eyes 
They have no control over them self 
Too much pain,pride to ask for help 
So they both grow old 
Not knowing what each other holds 
The pain starts to blind 
And starts consuming the mind 
So now their gone 
Living life all wrong 
Too many risks they take 
Far too many mistakes made 
Two souls will be lost 
Because of the silence they fought 
Look what they have given in 
Something never given the chance to begin

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007



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