Two Lonely Soul

A soul that feels half died
A soul that once was whole and so alive with fire
A soul that couldn't possibly love any more then it had before
Until the day that his soul had started to die
When she took her last breath

A soul that still has a lot of life in it
A soul that has holes in it
A soul with broken wings
A soul that once was whole
A soul that once could fly
Until her soul became broken with holes and the wings broke
Her broken wings on her soul is from the love of her life, who made her think he stopped loving her
Her holes in her soul is from
People who meant the world to her had passed
Every last breath, each one of them took
Created a very deep hole in her soul

God had brought these two lonely soul together
Why?
They both asked them self
Neither one, gets any answers
When they are together
There souls are almost as one

As her soul turns his soul a little brighter
As his soul starts to patch up the holes in her soul
Even though when they are together there souls don't feel that damaged
They're souls can never become one
Cause, her soul has broken wings
His soul wings are in heaven
So their souls will always be
Two lonely souls
That can't fly
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 9/27/2017 6:51:00 AM
It's a sad concept, two lonely souls. Both trying to reach each other.... You have written that so beautifully.
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Agnes Lollman
Date: 9/29/2017 10:01:00 PM
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