Two Lenses Unchanged

Two Lenses - Unchanged

When I was young and foolish
I’d do things not quite schoolish.
My naked feet danced barefoot  in the rain
splashing in water running toward the drains
until grams admonished me on my childish ways. 

Today,  I am always wearing socks and shoes
careful outside where my feet may get bruised,
but in the warm spring storms and  rainy days
I stand at the door and watch the children play
 whose simplistic innocence restores my youth.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A   Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 4:56 AM
Congratulations...pd
Kendrick Avatar
February 29, 2016 at 8:22 AM
Thank you for participating in my contest “Two Lenses”..It was an honor to read your entry..Sara
Kimathi Avatar
February 29, 2016 at 3:53 AM
Hi DM. Congrats for your WIN in the contest, with this amazing verse!!! ;-)
Tagore Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 7:10 AM
Same here... Beautifully described. Hugs, Bobby
Gentry Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 12:59 PM
Congratulations on your win! Really enjoyed this.
Allison Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 3:42 PM
I like your descritptive write and especially reminiscing in the second stanza - lovely turn of the story - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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