Two Kittens

two gray kittens
tussell on the lawn
a strutting blue jay
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Dietrich Avatar
June 8, 2015 at 11:17 PM
I would say this one is the best of all the ones I have seen. GREAT juxtaposition!!
Uche O. Avatar
March 14, 2015 at 4:16 AM
fast response to the immediate environment. you are observant. the two kittens make a nice scene.
Henderson Avatar
March 13, 2015 at 12:48 AM
Thank you Safa, I'm pushing 80 now and this poem came from my deep past when about 12 years old. A blue jay enjoying teasing our two new kittens. The mama cat was successfull in ending the situation however and had a blue jay lunch.
Thajudeen Avatar
March 13, 2015 at 12:26 AM
A fine creation. -Safa
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