Two Hearts Intertwined

Two hearts intertwined, yet divided by time. 
If I could, I would take both our hearts hold them together as they beat forever.... 
watch as they mate, watch as they inflate, pulsate... 
one word could never reiterate the state of what I would love to create
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Sweetheart Avatar
November 30, 2010 at 5:10 PM
Shane this is a lovely write.. very creative the way u presented your lines.. u should enter it in BG's contest on time... luv..good luck with luv..
Kendrick Avatar
November 30, 2010 at 4:47 PM
Interesting work..Welcome to soup ..May your stay be long and many more poems be posted for us to read..I am glad that I stopped by this one this eve..Sara
Mehta Avatar
November 30, 2010 at 1:05 PM
Nice write on the passionate thoughts, Shane
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