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Two Hearts Intertwined

Two hearts intertwined, yet divided by time. If I could, I would take both our hearts hold them together as they beat forever.... watch as they mate, watch as they inflate, pulsate... one word could never reiterate the state of what I would love to create

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Date: 11/30/2010 5:10:00 PM
Shane this is a lovely write.. very creative the way u presented your lines.. u should enter it in BG's contest on time... luv..good luck with luv..
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Date: 11/30/2010 4:47:00 PM
Interesting work..Welcome to soup ..May your stay be long and many more poems be posted for us to read..I am glad that I stopped by this one this eve..Sara
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Date: 11/30/2010 1:05:00 PM
Nice write on the passionate thoughts, Shane
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