Two Hands Keeping Warm

two hands keeping warm..

                fingers searching without sight

                                                  pocketed as one..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Laan Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 12:18 PM
Oh this is really special, I love the fingers without sight, pocketed as one, beautiful love captured in this moment.
Neels Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 6:55 AM
Awesome senryu, love the image you bring to life in this one.. Love Wilma
Sweetheart Avatar
January 2, 2011 at 8:18 PM
only one word to say ... YEAH!!!! J.G. to W.K.with luv forever and always.. even tough it is meaningless ..Coughlin will stay on.. YEAH!!!!!
Kendrick Avatar
January 1, 2011 at 9:54 AM
Excellent thoughts penned..Two are mostly always better than one..Enjoyed..My spirits were lifted at your presence at my blog..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
January 1, 2011 at 1:20 AM
oh, wow, I love this. I am a "handsies" girl.It was my favorite activity when I was a teenager dating! A big FAV
Shango Avatar
December 31, 2010 at 2:14 PM
Yeah, these hands know how to find warmth in the making of unity ,,, happy new year, my friend
Sweetheart Avatar
December 31, 2010 at 1:00 PM
Are u going to enter the John Heck contest with a new lyric for an Elton John song luv? I just did mine and hope u like ... if u get a moment to read.. tell Roseanna I am rooting for her Jets this week... anything New York is OK with the "Sweetheart" ... Jersey Girl forever and always..luv..
Guzzi Avatar
December 31, 2010 at 11:30 AM
I liked this. The dots at the end of the line are used in this form to indicate a change in the stream of thought and only 1 change is asked for so you would leave the dots off line 2. Having a title is cheating LOL and because of the great job you did unecessary. For P.S. just put line 1 in the title line when entering the verse EXCELLENT senyru!
Ruebel Avatar
December 31, 2010 at 10:02 AM
Hello Michael, This is beautiful and so full of love. You are quite the writer ya know. Have a Happy New Year Michael, love and blessings to you and yours always Lov, Shar
Sweetheart Avatar
December 31, 2010 at 5:37 AM
Soup Mail W.K. from J.G. with luv..
Peranteau Avatar
December 31, 2010 at 5:35 AM
A warm Senryu Sir ! Such a nice thought to start the New year with ! Happy New Year to you and yours dear poet ! much love, james
Sweetheart Avatar
December 31, 2010 at 5:30 AM
Tender loving feelings expressed in these three lines of intensity Michael.. such a romantic picture my friend... a special read early morning and so to relate to the entire day .. always u thrill me in every way my W.K. from your Jersey Girl with luv forever and always...H.N.Y... again and again...
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