Two Haiku On the Train To London

Automatic doors
let in people
and draughts automatically

As the darkness grows
the faces in the window
become more real

Kim James
8/1/96
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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December 28, 2019 at 6:06 PM
somehow that is disturbing and true... well written... I like the surrealness of it... Ann
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