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Two haiku about the sea

Sailing ships go by The wind sighs and follows close A white handkerchief * Breakers, so gentle Bands of sky blue, the wet dock They are almost home

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/13/2013 12:06:00 AM
Really like these two haiku, Jeremy! The first one is my favorite because I can easily visualize some lady waving them a hearty farewell with a handkerchief. I absolutely love it when haiku has the ability to make you think of things that were never even mentioned in the context. To be worded in such a way that a whole story is implied withing a single breath of reading.
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Date: 2/12/2013 10:24:00 PM
the feeling of almost arriving, makes the image of your poems grand... enjoyed Both the poems Jeremy.. have yourself a good one..LINDA
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Date: 2/12/2013 10:35:00 PM
Thanks, Linda! You, too!