Two Haiku

Strokes after midnight received a distant sad news a swallow has flown Watch over us dear I kept my prayers for you frosted in flowers

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/23/2014 5:37:00 PM

thank you again..PD

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/9/2014 3:55:00 PM

Hi Lily, this is such a beautiful emotional write! Congratulations on a fine win!

Saba Khan

Date: 6/8/2014 11:48:00 PM

Congratulations :)

Lily Twinkle
Date: 7/9/2014 9:49:00 AM

Thank you Saba for your kind words

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/8/2014 5:41:00 PM

Love the haiku....Linda

Lily Twinkle
Date: 7/9/2014 9:49:00 AM

Thank you Linda for your encouragement

Paul Callus

Date: 6/8/2014 2:16:00 PM

Love your take on this theme, Lily! Both final lines are striking. Congrats on a fine placing. // paul

Lily Twinkle
Date: 7/9/2014 9:49:00 AM

Thank you Paul for your encouragement

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/8/2014 10:39:00 AM

Lovely imagery you have used. Congrats on the winners' list.

Lily Twinkle
Date: 7/9/2014 9:48:00 AM

Thank you Andrea for your encouragement

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/8/2014 9:41:00 AM

Congrats on the win in the haiku contest on January, lily

Lily Twinkle
Date: 7/9/2014 9:48:00 AM

Thank you for your encouragement Dr Ram Mehta

Skat A

Date: 6/8/2014 8:35:00 AM

LILY, :) Congratulations, thank you for the support....... SKAT

Lily Twinkle
Date: 7/9/2014 9:48:00 AM

Thank you SKAT for your encouragement

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen

Date: 5/19/2014 7:39:00 AM

Very wise,

Lily Twinkle
Date: 5/22/2014 6:22:00 AM

Thank you Muhammad for your kind words.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/8/2014 8:31:00 AM

- Beautiful X 2, Lily !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Lily Twinkle
Date: 5/11/2014 11:10:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise for your kind words ;)