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Two Haiku

Strokes after midnight
received a distant sad news
a swallow has flown

Watch over us dear
I kept my prayers for you
frosted in flowers

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/23/2014 5:37:00 PM
thank you again..PD
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Date: 7/9/2014 3:55:00 PM
Hi Lily, this is such a beautiful emotional write! Congratulations on a fine win!
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Date: 6/8/2014 11:48:00 PM
Congratulations :)
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Lily Twinkle
Date: 7/9/2014 9:49:00 AM
Thank you Saba for your kind words
Date: 6/8/2014 5:41:00 PM
Love the haiku....Linda
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Date: 7/9/2014 9:49:00 AM
Thank you Linda for your encouragement
Date: 6/8/2014 2:16:00 PM
Love your take on this theme, Lily! Both final lines are striking. Congrats on a fine placing. // paul
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Date: 7/9/2014 9:49:00 AM
Thank you Paul for your encouragement
Date: 6/8/2014 10:39:00 AM
Lovely imagery you have used. Congrats on the winners' list.
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Date: 7/9/2014 9:48:00 AM
Thank you Andrea for your encouragement
Date: 6/8/2014 9:41:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the haiku contest on January, lily
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Date: 7/9/2014 9:48:00 AM
Thank you for your encouragement Dr Ram Mehta
Date: 6/8/2014 8:35:00 AM
LILY, :) Congratulations, thank you for the support....... SKAT
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Date: 7/9/2014 9:48:00 AM
Thank you SKAT for your encouragement
Date: 5/19/2014 7:39:00 AM
Very wise,
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Lily Twinkle
Date: 5/22/2014 6:22:00 AM
Thank you Muhammad for your kind words.
Date: 5/8/2014 8:31:00 AM
- Beautiful X 2, Lily !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/11/2014 11:10:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise for your kind words ;)