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Two Fools

Shallow ground forgot to wept
all the words that thrown were kept
and if I were you today
I think that you had more to say
and if you were for me that night
then why all the burden to begin that fight
I shall not keep these simple rules
If you and I are just two fools...

Copyright © Jessica Arteaga | Year Posted 2010

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Louis Rams Date: 3/8/2011 7:04:00 AM two fools who may tend to fight, but the making up makes it right. Login to Reply

Jayne Eggins Date: 10/1/2010 6:19:00 AM Congrates on having your poem featured this week ... "if you and I are just two fools" loved that end line Jessica well done love Jayne Login to Reply

Audrey Haick Date: 9/30/2010 8:32:00 PM Well said, Jessica...Congratulations on your poem featured this week on Soup! Peace, Audrey Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 9/29/2010 8:51:00 AM JESSICA, CoNGRATULATIoNS oN HAVING YoUR PoEM FEATURED THIS WEEK*luv~SKAT Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 9/27/2010 5:01:00 PM congrats on having your poem featured on the soup Jessica well deserved :)...P.D. Login to Reply

Rhia Madison Thomer Date: 9/27/2010 9:39:00 AM This was a beautiful addition to Soup, I felt the emotion in this poem, it was well penned. One for my fave's if I may :). This was truly powerful, especially the ending. Well don, your feature is well deserved! Beautiful. --Madison Login to Reply

Ravindra K Kapoor Date: 9/27/2010 9:04:00 AM Nice and interesting Poem. Congrats for it being your featured poem of the week. Love and best wishes..Ravindra...Jessica Arteaga Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 9/27/2010 6:23:00 AM Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Jessica. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 9/26/2010 2:54:00 PM Congrats Jessica on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a nice one to share with us all my friend with luv... Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 9/20/2010 1:06:00 PM WELL DONE JSSICA*lv~SKAT Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 9/20/2010 11:41:00 AM Interesting thoughts penned in this one.I am glad that I chose this as one of the one that I was to read today..Sara Login to Reply

Michael Benkhen Date: 9/20/2010 10:24:00 AM Nicely written, the first line kind of made me stumble but the flow took off from there. Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 9/20/2010 10:16:00 AM enjoyed your poem,..p.d. Login to Reply