Two Fools

Shallow ground forgot to wept
all the words that thrown were kept
and if I were you today
I think that you had more to say
and if you were for me that night
then why all the burden to begin that fight
I shall not keep these simple rules
If you and I are just two fools...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Rams Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 7:04 AM
two fools who may tend to fight, but the making up makes it right.
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October 1, 2010 at 6:19 AM
Congrates on having your poem featured this week ... "if you and I are just two fools" loved that end line Jessica well done love Jayne
Haick Avatar
September 30, 2010 at 8:32 PM
Well said, Jessica...Congratulations on your poem featured this week on Soup! Peace, Audrey
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September 29, 2010 at 8:51 AM
JESSICA, CoNGRATULATIoNS oN HAVING YoUR PoEM FEATURED THIS WEEK*luv~SKAT
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September 27, 2010 at 5:01 PM
congrats on having your poem featured on the soup Jessica well deserved :)...P.D.
Thomer Avatar
September 27, 2010 at 9:39 AM
This was a beautiful addition to Soup, I felt the emotion in this poem, it was well penned. One for my fave's if I may :). This was truly powerful, especially the ending. Well don, your feature is well deserved! Beautiful. --Madison
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September 27, 2010 at 9:04 AM
Nice and interesting Poem. Congrats for it being your featured poem of the week. Love and best wishes..Ravindra...Jessica Arteaga
Brown Avatar
September 27, 2010 at 6:23 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Jessica. Love, Carol
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September 26, 2010 at 2:54 PM
Congrats Jessica on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a nice one to share with us all my friend with luv...
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September 20, 2010 at 1:06 PM
WELL DONE JSSICA*lv~SKAT
Kendrick Avatar
September 20, 2010 at 11:41 AM
Interesting thoughts penned in this one.I am glad that I chose this as one of the one that I was to read today..Sara
Benkhen Avatar
September 20, 2010 at 10:24 AM
Nicely written, the first line kind of made me stumble but the flow took off from there.
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September 20, 2010 at 10:16 AM
enjoyed your poem,..p.d.
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