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Two Fools

Shallow ground forgot to wept all the words that thrown were kept and if I were you today I think that you had more to say and if you were for me that night then why all the burden to begin that fight I shall not keep these simple rules If you and I are just two fools...

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Louis Rams

Date: 3/8/2011 7:04:00 AM

two fools who may tend to fight, but the making up makes it right.

Jayne Eggins

Date: 10/1/2010 6:19:00 AM

Congrates on having your poem featured this week ... "if you and I are just two fools" loved that end line Jessica well done love Jayne

Audrey Haick

Date: 9/30/2010 8:32:00 PM

Well said, Jessica...Congratulations on your poem featured this week on Soup! Peace, Audrey

Skat A

Date: 9/29/2010 8:51:00 AM

JESSICA, CoNGRATULATIoNS oN HAVING YoUR PoEM FEATURED THIS WEEK*luv~SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/27/2010 5:01:00 PM

congrats on having your poem featured on the soup Jessica well deserved :)...P.D.

Rhia Madison Thomer

Date: 9/27/2010 9:39:00 AM

This was a beautiful addition to Soup, I felt the emotion in this poem, it was well penned. One for my fave's if I may :). This was truly powerful, especially the ending. Well don, your feature is well deserved! Beautiful. --Madison

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 9/27/2010 9:04:00 AM

Nice and interesting Poem. Congrats for it being your featured poem of the week. Love and best wishes..Ravindra...Jessica Arteaga

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/27/2010 6:23:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Jessica. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/26/2010 2:54:00 PM

Congrats Jessica on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a nice one to share with us all my friend with luv...

Skat A

Date: 9/20/2010 1:06:00 PM

WELL DONE JSSICA*lv~SKAT

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/20/2010 11:41:00 AM

Interesting thoughts penned in this one.I am glad that I chose this as one of the one that I was to read today..Sara

Michael Benkhen

Date: 9/20/2010 10:24:00 AM

Nicely written, the first line kind of made me stumble but the flow took off from there.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/20/2010 10:16:00 AM

enjoyed your poem,..p.d.