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Two Fat Pigeons

Two fat pigeons sitting on my sill Just passing by, just saying hello Perhaps just a rest before they go If I open my window I’ll scare them away It’s so nice to have company on a boring day One grayish black the other grayish white I welcome them both to stay through the night Two close friends out for a fly Could it be their lost, do they need my help Not a chirp, not a sound, not even a yelp I could offer them lunch, a cracker or two Or a handful of crumbs like you give at the zoo May and Ray, I’ll name my new friends When you fly away and this happy day ends An open invitation will certainly extend I’ll crack my window and leave a few crumbs From today moving forward we’ll always be chums

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 11/30/2018 1:23:00 PM
Very well done, Victoria..I see them at your window as I read your poem.
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Victoria Addino
Date: 12/10/2018 8:44:00 PM
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Victoria Addino
Date: 12/10/2018 8:34:00 PM
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Date: 11/30/2018 10:01:00 AM
Nice piece Victoria and thanks for following me, This has lovely rhyme and flow making it such a joy to read. Blessings, Gordon
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Victoria Addino
Date: 12/10/2018 8:35:00 PM
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Date: 11/29/2018 11:24:00 PM
Thank you for the wonderfully rhyming poem about May and Ray. I can see them, and I can see that you are a bird lover. Your rhymes are really good! Like the poem. Welcome to Poetry Soup, Victoria.
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Victoria Addino
Date: 12/10/2018 8:53:00 PM
Yes Caren it’s true I am a bird lover the truth is I love writing about natures Mysterious wonders
Date: 11/28/2018 4:46:00 AM
What a nice poem Victoria, when I was younger my brothers and I raised homing pigeons so I can relate to this story.
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Victoria Addino
Date: 12/10/2018 8:44:00 PM
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