Two Entwined

Regret drips slowly 
down the terraced walls, it never falls.
A thick green moss forms in the shadows,
a smothering caul. 

~He was a friend to all.~ 

Forevers were sworn,
all that's left are yesterdays, long gone.
What will tomorrow bring, will it be
the joy for which we long? 

~Daughter, Wife, Mother, Mine.~  

A blanket shelters
naked, tearful, truths, and pain we'll not see
like the moss it cloaks regret in dark
cloaking you and me.  

~Two truthful souls lie here.~ 

The ending's so near
But still we try - and still we cry on
for little do we know how close it is, 
how far, how near, gone.

 3 Epitaph's & Quatrain
Poets ~ Craig Cornish & Debbie Guzzi
Date 9/23/13
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Kendrick Avatar
October 3, 2013 at 1:43 PM
Way to go winning lady..Great work ..Congrats to you and Craig..Sara
A  Avatar
October 3, 2013 at 11:08 AM
nice team work........... lovely win............SKAT
Lamoureux Avatar
October 1, 2013 at 7:17 PM
Great team work, congratulations to you both.
Hamilton Avatar
October 1, 2013 at 3:45 PM
congrats on win in team work contest Ty for entering Shadow x smile
Richards Avatar
September 26, 2013 at 8:50 AM
Ahh......two of the finer poets in a wonderful collaboration........what a terrific piece of old world poetry! Excellent!
Phookan Avatar
September 25, 2013 at 11:17 AM
Love such work,, when two very fine poets piece together and create something like this. This is pure and sublime to me, Debbie!! Much love...
A   Avatar
September 24, 2013 at 9:46 AM
very cool write enjoyed
Ndlovu Avatar
September 24, 2013 at 12:37 AM
Great collaboration...wow, so very touching. ^_^ Y.L.N
Dietrich Avatar
September 24, 2013 at 12:30 AM
gorgeous writing from you two. You are a dynamic duo!!
Chircop Avatar
September 24, 2013 at 12:01 AM
This is very sad yet so very beautiful dear Deborah and Craig..Touched me in many ways..
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