Sandile Msane Poet Rhyme

Two Different Worlds

One face with two different smiles 
One floor with two different tiles 
One pen with two different inks 
One eye with two different blinks 
One child with different parents 
One sea with two different currents 
One smile for two different reasons 
One sun for two different seasons 
One mind with two different thoughts 
One crime judged in two different courts 
One husband with two different wives 
One man with two different lives 
One soul with two different friends 
One beginning with two different ends
One mouth but two different words
One person in two different worlds 

by Ndile

submitted October 7th, 2009 at 2:58am

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Alisher Mirzoev August 22, 2013 at 2:55 AM Perfectly done Sandile, I add this poem to my faves, good job! - Alisher Sandile Msane August 22, 2013 at 3:04 AM thank you Alisher

Siza Sibiya June 7, 2013 at 10:04 AM I love your one is to two life hypocrasy. Sandile Msane June 10, 2013 at 4:11 AM Thanx man

Dave Timperley February 22, 2012 at 10:46 AM This I like. Sounds like an internal battle of good v bad. Feel like I have been there in the past. God bless. Dave. Sandile Msane June 12, 2012 at 6:22 AM Yes Dave a battle in which good will prevail.I'm glad it touched you, God bless you too.

Carol Sunshine Brown February 22, 2012 at 6:19 AM Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Sandile. Love, Carol Sandile Msane June 12, 2012 at 6:21 AM I'm very honoured to have my poem featured this week, thank you for comment!

Shirley Long February 20, 2012 at 11:58 AM Congratulations on your featured poem, It is well-written and I enjoyed reading it. Sandile Msane June 12, 2012 at 6:18 AM Thank you very much Shirley,I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Anne-Lise Andresen February 20, 2012 at 5:28 AM Like the way you did this poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise Sandile Msane June 12, 2012 at 6:17 AM Thank you Anne

Maureen Lefanue February 9, 2012 at 4:51 PM Dear Sadile, Thank you for your kind comment re my poem. I thoroughly enjoyed your Two Different Worlds - an interesting write! God bless, Maureen Sandile Msane February 10, 2012 at 3:20 AM You're welcome, it'sjust that I really enjoyed enjoyed your poem. Im glad you enjoyed my poem too

Glenn Sentes February 9, 2012 at 3:52 AM THIS is an awesome write, I must admit! Welcome to PoetrySoup, mate! Keep inspiring! =) Sandile Msane February 9, 2012 at 4:50 AM Thank you very much Glenn, your comment really means a lot to me.

Lucilla Carrillo February 8, 2012 at 5:46 AM Again a nice write. Sometimes it feels like we do live in two different worlds. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla Sandile Msane February 10, 2012 at 3:22 AM Thank you Lucilla, Im glad you enjoyed it